I'm Drunk on Your Tears, Baby - Comments

I'm so glad that I tried again with this story.
I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more.

I was really interested in reading this so I'm going to try and be constructive, I'm sorry if I come across in any other way.
I didn't finish reading the first chapter so if things have changed I'm sorry but I found this very difficult to read. The speech isn't separated and everything seemed slightly rushed. You also contradicted yourself when you say that your character only calls him valo when they are fighting. The story also seemed to lack much description.

Love it, man she keeps forgiving him and honestly instead of constantly of asking Ville to come down to America just call and talk to him so tht way Ville won't have to constantly remind u of how much he loves you and u repeating tht u love him but not in love with him I mean it's a repeating cycle everytime Bam does something wrong, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Man he keeps fucking up, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Please update this again, it's so good! I wanna know what happens with Ashlee and bam!

Good news, this one's next for an update - tomorrow!

Update?? ^_^

so good!!!

@ xxlouise.filth
yay!!!!

@ kaylakelly49
Thanks so much! I just updated and good news - there's a lot more to come. ^-^
xx

this story is great! please get back into it and update soon!

I like it =D
Really can't wait for the next part.

~NN

I see you really like W.T.F xD I love this add more soon!

Thank you :]

More please? Aha. I really like it, sweetie. :]