I don't know if you remember me, but I'm the girl that found out about you from twitter. My username's the same. Sorry it took so long!
Anyways, I really like this. I'm Jardine obsessed so it makes sense haha. Athough I think and Jack and Tay would make a better couple.
But about your story! I really like your writting style. You describe the characters' inner feelings extremely well. I'm trying to figure out just what Alex did! From the first chapter it seemed like he pulled a one-stand or fuck-her-forget-about-her type of deal, but I'm thinking there is more to it than that. I can't wait to see where this is headed :)
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUREN! hi um yes hello, it's me : ) i am going to share with you my toughts and feelings from this first chapter, okay? right well, it was extremely well written and you're very talented. i like your use of description too, that was very nicely done. now onto the actual story thus far; okay, well it seems like alex has done something bad, aw. i can't wait to find out what it is! tay seems like she's gonna be a bitch towards him because of it and he's gonna get butthurt aw! i like how i'm pretty much fangirling over you right now. um yeah so this is brill and i can't wait for the rest :-) xo