Young & Reckless - Comments

Wow, haha. That's all I can really say to this. I just spent the last 15 minutes reading this beautiful story. I enjoy writing romance novels, and the fact that you took a random picture that was probably made for something entirely different, and made it into a love story from a mans point of view just amazes me. Bravo. Please do more of these. I would be more than happy to read several more of them. :]

Wow, haha. That's all I can really say to this. I just spent the last 15 minutes reading this beautiful story. I enjoy writing romance novels, and the fact that you took a random picture that was probably made for something entirely different, and made it into a love story from a mans point of view just amazes me. Bravo. Please do more of these. I would be more than happy to read several more of them. :]

Firstly, thanks so much for entering my contest with not one, but two stories! You rule! Secondly, oh my god I have yet to read anything by you that I do not love.

Favorite line would have to be, "As his name began to roll off of her lips in a strained falsetto, James could feel his muscles begin to clench, his hips convulsing wildly as he struggled to fuck her through her orgasm."

The vocabulary you use in this is insanely good, it really sets you apart. I was so drawn to this, because you didn't have to use really smutty words, to make it smut. That's awesome. I'll be the first to admit, that although I love me some smut, I often cringe at the ridiculous wording.

I seriously wish this never ended! Everything about this was just excellent.

I'm still new at describing and writing smut scenes and this one is quite a piece to inspire. I might sound perverted but well yeah...anyway I like how you describe everything and how well you get the reader into what's happening in there. I also like how you described the relationship between the two characters. everyone has urges and there doesn't need to be either love nor a fuck buddies relationship...it can be a little bit of both. I like it a lot:) and usually it's all from the girl's point of view. it's refreshing to read something from his point of view.

I am not really familiar with the famdom and I dont usually read this kind of story but for some reason the comment swap has thrown A LOT of them at me today ha xD anyways, it was a great story and I hope you write more in the future :)

I liked the details and I like that you established the characters. I think it was well written and interesting. I've been gettin hit wth a lot of one shots lately which sucks because they capture me and then drop, which isn't what a one shot should do. Yours captured me, and left me wanting more. I think it was great!

I liked the details that you put into this, and the fact that it was written from his point of view made it rather interesting to read about. I also liked the emotion that you put into it as well. I was glad that it wasn't just a casual, meaningless hookup. It was two people that care about each other but don't love one another, and that put a different spin on things that isn't often accomplished in fiction, let alone fan fiction. I must admit, I read this as an original since I know next to nothing about either of the characters, but either way, it was written quite well and I rather enjoyed reading it. Great job and thanks for entering the contest, and I'm sorry for the late comment.

I really loved this, you detailed it very nicely and everything! You're a very talented writer.

I love the way that you wrote this. I liked the fact that you wrote it from the guys point of view. I also enjoyed the way that you took the time to describe not just the sex but the little details that many forget but are often times important to a story. This is not just smut but it's a creative writing piece that involved that and I rather enjoyed it. I enjoyed the style of writing and I enjoyed reading it. The layout was nice and it was very easy on the eyes. You encorporated the whipped cream very well into your story. It wasn't something that seemed forced but was really effortless. Great job and thanks for entering mine and Kayla's contest.

this was really good(: i love your writing, you always come up with the most creative things. great job on the detailing; i almost felt like i was there watching everything. brava(:

I'm not lesbo, but damn, that picture is sexy! And the story... Gawd.;)