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  • everdeen

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    That was hot! Loved how it wasn't cheesy or just lust, congrats.
    July 28th, 2013 at 09:54pm
  • la dispute.

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    I loved this for many reasons! Hahaa. I enjoyed, first of all, that it was a one-shot about John! I always enjoy a good smut story! I loved how you incorporated a couple of lyrics into the story flawlessly, not making them really noticeable or cheesy. You were wonderfully descriptive and I didn't catch but maybe one or two mistakes, but it in no way took away from your writing! Again, I really loved this and thank you for writing it! :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 08:38am
  • alustreya

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    Commenting first because this deserves a comment because it's incredibly cute and sexy and cute and ohgoodnessJohn you are adorable.

    I love you <3
    July 18th, 2011 at 11:03pm
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