I loved this for many reasons! Hahaa. I enjoyed, first of all, that it was a one-shot about John! I always enjoy a good smut story! I loved how you incorporated a couple of lyrics into the story flawlessly, not making them really noticeable or cheesy. You were wonderfully descriptive and I didn't catch but maybe one or two mistakes, but it in no way took away from your writing! Again, I really loved this and thank you for writing it! :)