I want to say that I liked it :3 in a twisted sort of way that is. The mindset was interesting, like how he didn't want to feel what he felt but at the same time couldn't help himself. And despite how usually black and white layouts bug me this one didn't :)
18/20 Originality and Creativity. very original and very creative! noice job! 20/20 Follows Prompt. self explanatory. 9/10 Spelling and Grammar. I think there was, like, one mistake. but good writing style. 3/5 Vocabulary. no exotic words or anything. I'm a loser that likes big words. :B 4/5 Appeal. I like your layout.
+1 word count. +1 link to contest. (waiting for all entries to be submitted to announce favourite layout) +3 for being on time!
The mindset was interesting, like how he didn't want to feel what he felt but at the same time couldn't help himself.
And despite how usually black and white layouts bug me this one didn't :)