Do Better - Comments

I think this is the best thing you've written. :) It's different, all points of view- ie first, second, and third. and I dunno. Def your best work, and probably one of the best one-shots on mibba.
I also think the picture of Bryson is the person who played Peter Pan in the live action movie. Not Hook, the actual Peter Pan. I think he is, not entirely sure. Either way he's gorgeous (:

So ridiculously cute, oh my goodness gracious me!

Quite beautiful :) it was very enlightening!
<3

You know I love your writing, Nicole. That was outstanding, as always. I got mixed up a few times with the names of the boys, but that was fine. I have a bad tendency for doing that. But I really liked this. I'm really impressed with how you based this off of the story, because I really like this picture, and some people did one-shots on my others, and didn't stand up to my expectations as much. But you did :]
This was amazing.

That was extremely cute and interesting ^-^
One question: who was narrating this? Since "I" was used a few times I'm assuming someone?