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  • Unexpected.

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    I think this is the best thing you've written. :) It's different, all points of view- ie first, second, and third. and I dunno. Def your best work, and probably one of the best one-shots on mibba.
    I also think the picture of Bryson is the person who played Peter Pan in the live action movie. Not Hook, the actual Peter Pan. I think he is, not entirely sure. Either way he's gorgeous (:
    April 23rd, 2012 at 05:37am
  • eric halvorsen

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    So ridiculously cute, oh my goodness gracious me!
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    Quite beautiful :) it was very enlightening!
    <3
    July 21st, 2011 at 04:08pm
  • crescendo.

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    You know I love your writing, Nicole. That was outstanding, as always. I got mixed up a few times with the names of the boys, but that was fine. I have a bad tendency for doing that. But I really liked this. I'm really impressed with how you based this off of the story, because I really like this picture, and some people did one-shots on my others, and didn't stand up to my expectations as much. But you did :]
    This was amazing.
    July 18th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • Skwahdala

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    That was extremely cute and interesting ^-^
    One question: who was narrating this? Since "I" was used a few times I'm assuming someone?
    July 18th, 2011 at 03:40am
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