This is a really good short story, it makes you wonder whats behind their words and feelings and what had happened. Love it, to me it's quite a powerful piece of writing x
July 21st, 2011 at 04:03pm
For the contest. :)
I was happy to see that you used your chosen picture in your layout. Your choice of colors wasn't something I was too fond of, but it won't hurt the impression I got.
Some of the sentences sounded a little weird, but maybe it's just me. After reading this story, I was left to wonder what really happened to Charlie, and I would have liked a little more detail about it. Overall, it was a good story and I could relate to the difficulty of letting someone go.
Good luck!
