I think this is a great story so far! You might want to go through it once or twice to fix some awkwardly worded sentences, but other than that I love it! Can't wait for your next update :)
I can't even express to you the feelings I feel right now at the fact that Vegeance had a boner. *waves hands around franticly* But I wonder what's gonna happen sixth period. *winks*
Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter! I squealed like a little school girl when you gave me a shoutout in your author's note!! Thanks a shitload!!! I can't wait to read more but until then... ^_^
What the fuck?! Nobody has commented on this story!! Fucking losers. But I love Phoebe's eyes!! my two favorite colors! *giggles* Anywhoo!! This going good so far and I can't wait to read more but until then... ^_^