Ou la la! I was grinning the whole time her and Fred had their little make out session.;) I love that the both of them are so bold. Well, Fred seems a bit more bolder, but I love that Lianna doesn't just shy away; she gives it just as good. And I laughed when George made that little joke at their expense. But, in all honesty, I'm willing to bet Fred's kisses are much more valuable than Galleons. Although, you know, I'd prefer George's. But nevermind that. Lol. I'm interested in seeing how her experience at Hogwarts will shape out! I always love when you update! :)
kdvbSUIADSIFBIDIUKS Woah. That was some payment, huh? ;D Yeah I had a giggling fit when that happened omg I love this storyyyyy and I love Lianna and Fred and George and just everyone lkfkjbsdivu more soon please? :D
Awe! I love how Lianna was sort of like mother hen to all of the first years, despite her own nerves! Lol. And when the Sorting began, I was reading, but at the same time, trying not to look down So I wouldn't spoil it when I found out what house she was in. But thank goodness, She got into Gryffindor! I kind of squealed for her! Hahaa. And I laughed out loud, literally, when Fred and George kept piling food onto her plate. I could just imagine them really doing that. Lol. And gah. Umbridge - the barmy toad - comes in. :P I loved this chapter and as always, I'm excited for more! :D
i love this story it has a nice flair to it, i enjoyed it so much when i got to the last chapter you wrote i looked for a new one saw it was the most recent one you wrote and my face just dropped, like what happens when you find out the vacation you were going to go on was canceled because of rain. Keep writing you very good.
Awwww I like little Tommy ^-^ that Michael kid should've fallen off that boat >.< I can't wait to see what her first day of classes will be like (especially with the toad lady) andddd I want to see how her relationship with Fred progresses (: As usual, I love this story, and I can't wait to read more ^-^
I just noticed I did not comment on the last chapter so here we go! (Oh also I will be getting you up to 35.)
I don't think I have ever wanted someone to update more then now! I can not wait to see what house you place her in, even though you know what all of us want. I cannot believe that Fred kissed her! WOW! What a cliffhanger you meanie! UPDATE ASAP!
Okay, I may have to revoke my last comment - this may be my favorite chapter! Hahaa. I kind of felt bad for her because of what her mother said, but I realize that that's just the way Her character is and she probably didn't mean it to sound as rude as she did! But I was laughing at the twins' reactions; typical boys. And I found it amusing when she bumped into Goyle ... that should be interesting! Lol. And the ending - the ending made it my favorite chapter! Hahaa. I loved that Fred just made a bold move and kissed her and complimented her figure ... well, In a way that only Fred could do. Hahaa. It was completely adorable! I can't wait for more! :)
O_O O_O O_O OH. MY. GODRIC. FAJXVWKSIDBIWBXLWVD THEY KISSED. IT IS ABOUT DAMNED TIME! *runs in circles squealing like an idiot* They are so cute together it's ridiculous! I just love them, I really do. ^-^ I can't wait for more!
As always this chapter was brilliant. The best one yet, I'd say. How long do you plan on having this story, chapter wise? I love Lianna's mother. Too funny. I can't wait to see where she is sorted. Making friends with Goyle might not have been the best way to start the year . . . according to Fred I'm sure. She's already caught his fancy. Won't be long until Malfoy makes his appearance. Keep writing, I scour my email every day too see if I have a notification. <3
I have to say, this has been my favorite chapter so far! I was smiling and laughing the whole way through! ;) I love how you're able to convey the twins' personalities so well! And their dreams, hahaa, I was feeling second-hand embarrassment for them! Lol. I'm kind of sad they called truce, as I loved their prank war, but with the twins, I'm sure there's plenty more to expect! Lol. I love this and can't wait for more! :)