I think I'm not going to like James in this story. He's already thinking about other girls and Severus only thinks about Lily. I was so happy to see you updated. I had to read at once!
Awe, this was absolutly amazing, dear. I will definitly be looking forward to the next chapter on this :) I love your style of writing, it's amazing. Your writing has always been so beautiful. Nice layout and beautiful banner ^_^ Good work and I can't wait to read more!
Oh wow... I've never been that emotional when reading a story before. I think that it's because it's Snape, and because of the way you described the emotions so well and made his love so clear that it broke my heart. Though I have to admit; I frowned a little when Sirius was being horrible to him, because I love both those men so much that I wish they were friends. You know what would be cool? A Sirius/Snape pairing. Just to be random. And just because I'm perverted like that.
This was written so incredibly well, and I feel like I could read it forever. That bit about the invisible ink reminded me of when I bought myself the 'Harry Potter Magic Kit', and it came with an invisible ink pen. I went around writing spells on everything for weeks. :face
I love how true you're staying to the storyline, and how you're including everyone. Though I'll admit it; I'll be pissed when Wormtail makes his appearance. I wish I could give you a more coherent comment, but I've been in bed all day sick and my mind is a jumbled mess lmfao. I LUB THIS STORY AND I LUB YOU FOR WRITING IT. <3
The entire chapter was just so heartbreaking and just... gah. My heart was wrenched the whole way through. So sad. </3
I feel so deeply for Snapemyman. :'( He just slipped up is all, and not to mention his love for Lily is just so hkdfhkfdkh and he has to watch her tromp around with James and just... :'( Muh boyyyy, Snape. I know that feel, bro. Love his owl's name, by the way. Marrrrvelous.
And Lily. Hmmph. *puts nose up in air* Maybe I'm just being defensive about my Snapeykins, but she should run to him and declare they be in mushy romance forever and always. :') I mean, I feel for her being insulted like that, but look at Snape. "What a man, what a man, what a man, what a mighty good man."
Ahahaa, dislike of James. Dang ho can stfu and quit his hollerin' at muhhh boy Snape. Sirius is too loved by my bias to be commented on at this moment in time. :coffee And LUPIN MUH BOYYY, good for you for keeping your zipper on your mouth zipped. Good man, good man.
Overall, lovely! I can't wait to see where it's headed because I love Snape/Lily dearly. :') And you're an amazing writer, so I know it'll be BOOM CHICKA BOOM BOOM CHICK awesome.
I AM SUCH A FAN OF LILY and SNAPE!! GOD!! I LOVE YOU FRO WRITING THISS!! :DDDD <3