I really like this story and I swear I have seen it somewhere before!! I mean I think I remember reading this and I liked it than!! I can't wait to read more!! I'm so impressed with the way you handle knowing 11 languages as I struggle to even learn a second one!! That is amazing and impresses me and I really do hope that you update this story, beucase I'm addicted and I find it very good!! I can't wait to read more!!! :)!!
Also, just to remind people, I never bashed the story. I only gave genuine critiques and then offered to help in private. Helping someone improve is not bashing an author or being cruel in any way. Writing is a learning process and none of us are perfect.
It's hard to think anyone said anything negative about this story. Who cares if spelling is not perfect. It's just a slammin' story. Would not guess that English is your second language and sorry to hear about everything that is going on. We all wish you well, I'm sure. I know I do. Epic update and I don't even want to guess what happens next becuase it's so fucking good! You just keep writing because you are so good at it.
Why do I actually imagine Bam trying to drink away his problems. I hope we he goes see her nothing too bad happens. :) Great like always and don't worry in trying to make it perfect its awesome the was it is. Also I hope you feel better and everything I'll even write you a one-shot of whatever so it can make you feel awesome! But no guarantees it be good I just barely got into writing and English is my second language but I'll try. :D
Wow I just started reading this story and I have to say its pretty good honestly. I really got hooked! And I also read your message from the last chapter and was pretty suprised because this story is pretty damn well written for someone who's first language isn't english so I don't know what some peoples problem are and that gets me annoyed because their are a lot of poorly written stories on this website and some with not even a plot. So I say you should be proud because this story is great, the characters are awesome, and the plot is fantastic. Can't wait for more! Their little family is so cute!