The Beach - Comments

I can't believe it's over, but it ended perfectly. I loved reading this.

okay just wow
I've loved this story so much and I'm so so sad that it's ended but it's been amazing!
You are seriously an amazing writer! :)

aw i'm so sad that it has ended but i loved it! well done!

wjhbfdjaskdf sooo good :) i really really love this story!! update soon :) & i realllly would love a sequel !!

She hasn't told her parents that she moved? This should be an interesting conversation. What's a dive bar?

@ s0wrongitsrosie
I'm literally going to do it based on votes. But if this one does end up with a sequel, it wont be a long one.

congratulations!
and I love this story but please don't do a sequel, I want everything to end perfectly in this one and that's it aha!

@breepocket OOPS. Haha, yes, Jake!

@ yourepretty
Do you mean Jake? because you def kinda lost me lol

I vote that you do a sequel to this story. I also vote that you should have Adam and Alex get into a fist fight before this story ends. You know, because karma for banging his fiancé. Lol

I kinda feel bad for Jake. But I'm gad she cleared the air with him.

<chants> sequal! sequal! sequal!

Gahhh this chapter was so good. As for what you should focus on next I vote a sequel to this or the one to back pocket believers!

Loved the last few updates, Mibba hasn't been telling me when this gets updated for some reason so that's my reason for late comments aha. I honestly thought there was going to be a massive argument and fight then. Great update as always!

I thought Jake would start a fight with Alex or something...Loved the update

@ breepocket
Will it be sequel after them moving to Baltimore? Where the others could occasionally appear? :D Hmm, now you've got me intrigued as to what will happen... Alex' ex?

@ MusicLover525
I am but I'm contemplating a macy sequel. Next chapter is gonna be a surprise ill bet you don't see coming

that Jake would appear wasn't that much of a surprise but the way he reacted: "S'fine" and that's it?! O_O
I really thought that he would go all crazy... ^^
Either way, I'm glad that that is done.. I'm guessing that you will end it soon..?

I'm so sorry to hear about dog. I'm a dog lover too. Why do I have a feeling that Jake is going to he home when she goes to pack?

@ MusicLover525
thank you =]
Today is one of the rough days, which makes it harder. But she's older, so at least she's had along life until now.