Ohhhh I loved it! XD I love the way you describe him, not totally evil and insane like he's usually portrayed but actually...Tired of everything and kind of dull. It's a very nice change. And Oliver...Oh god, he's just fucking disgusting. He would fuck her until she would die? Why, she did nothing wrong. (That I know of so far) But yeah, you're kind of on the list of my favorite authors. :3 There were a few mistakes so I'll edit it for you.
Wow the second chapter is freaking awesome! I mean Jimmy buying Bonnie and she is obedient probably gotten it beaten in her when she was there in captivity. Now Bonnie is brought back to where JImmy is staying! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cannot wait for the next update! I am so excited for this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!