This is literally my 20th time reading it, not even exaggerating. I might have read it more but seriously, I love this so much. And I agree, there should be a sequel.
This is literally my 20th time reading it, not even exaggerating. I might have read it more but seriously, I love this so much. And I agree, there should be a sequel.
this was one of the most amazing one shots I've read. Please please please please consider working on a sequel if you haven't already.
This is just perfect. You don't rush anything, you build up everyone's character first.And the character development, when Jack realizes he wants his own "Grecio" and when he gives Alex his spot for the next meet. And wow.
Just literally everything about this is great. Pretty much fangirling about your ability to write okay c:
/recommends, subscribes, and creeps on your author page to hopefully find more stories./
I love this so much, I'm debating asking for a shout out on atf. Literally everyone should read this.ily for writing this perfect hehehehe <3
WOW UM THIS IS PERFECT AND NO WORDS. SERIOUSLY. it could be partly because i'm a swimmer and i'm just smiling throughout everything because i can relate somewhat BUT ITS STILL AMAZING. gosh wow. <3 amazing job
This is just. Perfect. In every way. Definitely one of the best stories I've read on here. The plot pacing was spot-on, the characters were written amazingly, and I love how specific all the swimming terminology was - it made everything seem that much more authentic. Fantastic job.