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  • faster.

    faster. (300)

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    Some grammar mistakes, but other than that I thought it was very well written / narrated :) Just study up a little on grammar rules (like punctuation) a little for future works and you'll be on your way :D
    July 19th, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • megooder

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    i entered the same contest :) rrrrrrrrrrrrrr, urs is better than mine :(
    July 19th, 2011 at 06:34am
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