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  • little motorkitty;

    little motorkitty; (630)

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    Okay, I seriously love the way you've written the Joker in this. Not only do I just pretty much love the Joker anyway, but a lot of the time he's not written the way I'm used to. The way you've written him reminded me of how he is in a lot of graphic novels, and kind of reminded me of The Killing Joke, which is a good thing, don't worry :)
    Giving up your name meant giving up a part of yourself, meant giving someone a certain power over you ~ I loved this line, and the determination she had to keep on to that tiny part of herself, I imagine it would be the way somebody stubborn would actually think when in a situation like that, and it's very easy to relate to.
    The ending was so good, and I loved how it was only the Joker speaking the whole way through it. It was so powerful and you could feel the fear in the girl. The moment when he made her look in his eyes I got goosebumps. It was so perfectly written, I adored it, every single bit of it. Perfect.
    October 11th, 2011 at 09:24pm
  • topless

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    WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING!?
    I'm abusing the different sizes and such, I know.

    Absolutely fantastic. /clapclapclapclap!
    August 9th, 2011 at 09:02pm