I'd Draw You Smiling - Comments

  • Lexi Wombat

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    I finally got around to rereading this and it's just as wonderful as it was the first time I read it. c:
    August 10th, 2014 at 07:06pm
  • Lijgirl1328

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    Though I'd let you know that i reread this story tonight, and it's still just as brilliant as the first time. I absolutely love this story. Off to read te sequel again :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 06:33am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Ohmygoddess, chappy10 was frikin' AMAZING!!!! & I had been certain that it would be George. :D The characters' mannerisms are just freaking PERFECT!!!!

    PS: Please read my HP fan fic?
    July 30th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • M.M.Mitchell

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    Great Ending! You summed everything up sooo nicely! I can't wait for the sequel!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 01:20am
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    I loved this story but I think you knew that already haha
    I'm sad it's over but I'm happy it shall be continuing :)
    Out of every story I've read on here I think I have to say you're ending was the best. I adored how it wasn't really an end, in a sense, but more so just a pause. I don't think that made much sense but I'm having issues trying to explain it right. I hope that didn't sound completely ridiculous haha
    Regardless, I adored how it concluded :)
    July 22nd, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    THEY KISSED. THEY. EFFING. KISSED.
    Don't mind me, I'm just squealing like a little girl.
    THERE'S A SEQUEL ALREADY?!
    O_O
    *runs off to sequel*
    July 22nd, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • M.M.Mitchell

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    Wow. That's intense. You do a great job tying in your plot to the book's and showing what goes on behind the scenes. Keep up the great work!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:46pm
  • Weasley

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    i love this very much and i'm only up to chapter 3. you have the characters so in tune with the way JK intended them and i'm so jealous ! and lacey is pretty darn lovely too! so great job, i hope you know that you're an excellent writer and have lots of potential.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 11:58am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Chappy8n was very good! I enjoyed it! Which twin is gonna profess his luv for herrrr?! This has got to turn out to be more than 10ch. long!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 08:18am
  • Lexi Wombat

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    I love this. SO. MUCH. Oh my bajeebus. I love Lacey's character and you should make the story longer than 10 parts, it is just too fantastic to be that short D:
    Lacey and George need to go and make some ginger babies. Right now.
    Update soon please before I go and find a field of mandrakes o.o
    :D?
    July 22nd, 2011 at 07:42am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Ohmygoddess, YES! Marry a twin, marry a twin!! Ron's so damn sweet, can there be more of him? 8D
    July 22nd, 2011 at 06:03am
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    So sweeeet!!!!----> "This is touching." George concluded, and he and Fred both put their heads on my shoulders
    July 22nd, 2011 at 04:49am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    OMGEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I luved that! I've totally had that most shameful problem of adoring a male for his absolute sexieness when he was an utter git. :)
    July 22nd, 2011 at 01:45am
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    I was almost worried that Lacey and Cedreic were going to go out and then I remember... Oh, he's dead. Whoops. Hahaha
    July 22nd, 2011 at 12:25am
  • topless

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    Gahh, you've updated a bagillion times!
    Love love love your story.
    Ron's got the right idea. ;)
    July 21st, 2011 at 09:15am
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    Lacey is adorable! I just love her character so much!
    Excellent chapter and the length was wonderful! More to read :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 05:37am
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    Ugh. I don't like Cedric /: Please don't have her end up with him. I like her and George ever so muc more(:
    July 21st, 2011 at 04:54am
  • M.M.Mitchell

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    Again with the humor! You've really nailed their characters. Update soon please!
    July 21st, 2011 at 03:23am
  • M.M.Mitchell

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    Hahaha! Great writing! I love the fact that Lacey is so upfront about everything and incredibly witty! zyou did a great job designing her character!
    July 20th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    I will definitely be sticking around for your next installment!
    I absolutely adore this story!
    July 20th, 2011 at 10:28pm