House of Syn - Comments

Hehe! I really liked this chapter.
Why can't Brian's illnesses be explained to the police 'cause that'll make it better for them to talk to him? Or, better yet, Dr Jose can talk to him with a police officer there. Poor Brian can't help it. Bless him :(

o.O thats freaky brian got sedated but syn didn't
update again soon please! i want to see how the cops work out brians illnesses

Oh god I loved this! Brian and Syn, such contrasting people but they mould together perfectly! ARGH, I ADORE THIS!!!!

More please! :D

You know what would be cool, if Zacky was a closet masochist and will enjoy being raped by Syn. He'll enjoy the innocent and sweet love of Brian and the fierce passion of Syn. That seems like a good idea doesn't it?

It's an awesome story!!!

ok time for the chapter analysis:
see its too awesome for words
haha and i knew zacky would fall for brian but i agree with imback4ever. he could change to syn at any moment and that is scary.... for zacky....wouldn't that be awkward (ok we're gonna get away from the plot for a second) well maybe not awkward but freakin terrifying like their in the middle of doin it or something and it switches to syn. o.O i wonder why i keep making that reference though....anyway i did not see that arrest coming and i hope syn doesn't show his face again for a while and thanks for that explanation in the author's note. i just have one question: what is a pyromaniac?
otherwise great chapter and i eagerly await the interrogation scene. it shall be very interesting

Soo....Zacky's in love with brain...but theres a chance brain can switch to syn at any moment.....Craaaaaaaaaaaap....O.O

this is my new story addiction, haha. i feel bad for zacky and some times wanna punch brian. i wanna knw what happens next. O.o please please please update soon!!!!!

wow... bri and jimmy are bi-polar

A bad aww and a good aww

and the pieces fall into place lol
it seems mister zacky and mister brian are getting along pretty well and along with Synyster_Halo9 i don't think brian shud rape him again i think next time zacky should want to have sex and for it to be awesome
it would make an interesting twist ;)

please update i love this story, sadistic brian! hahah

This fic is so dark and twisted..... I FUCKIN LUV IT!!!! I've always been morbid but this story is fan-fuckin-tastic! Brian should rape Zacky more...... I'm not heartless or anything but it would be exciting to see some action. Update soon?

I really enjoy this story!
It has inspired me to write a dark fanfic!
Any way, I'm hooked! Can't wait for another update!

i really like this story. it was kinda fast paced and hard to understand in the beginning with all the people but it got easier once they starting getting killed.
poor zacky :( he keeps getting raped
and i agree it must be weird if i like brian. he is sadistic but very cunning and precise. he thinks everything through and almost always knows his next move (except for when he has to improvise) but overall i like the whole concept. its.... dark and twisted.... which is something i like.
hes a very experienced killer being a sociopath which i love reading about as i try to understand it. Brian is a very complex character inculding Zacky and i wouldn't be surprised that even after all that he's done that zacky falls in love with him. brian also says that he feels no emotion but everything does. i'm sure in a way he has some emotion whether he realizes it or not or it will show up later in the story. also i'm not sure if you are planning to kill brian at the end. all horror movies do that or at least most of them do and honestly its a little predictable. but if you do kill brian off i'm sure it will be awesome to read. so i've made this long enough and i can't wait to see how this story turns out. i'm very excited!

Oh man. Hello! I really like this story :D Is it weird for me to love Brian in this? Call me a freak and whatnot… mind you, I can be quite sadistic sometimes…
ANYWAY! Enough of my rambling. I'll let you get back to writing this awesome storeh :D

i wonder if Zacky will fall for brian. Gosh brina is so creepy sometimes.

Hm...I thought he shot everybody or did he I'm confused.
Great update though. :)

I'm addicted to this story! MORE PLEASE!!! :D

OHMYGOD I LOVETHISSTORY
EEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
I like fucking love it!

Empty void of never ending darkness? Ooooo. Poor Zack. :D Update soon please!