August 23rd, 2011 at 10:12pm
Great update love. :)
Love ya
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August 23rd, 2011 at 09:56pm
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Loved it! <3August 22nd, 2011 at 09:48pm
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Ohhh shiiiiit Fights Fights Fights.
They should totally tell them or else they'll find out themselves. :/
Maybe when the police goes to tell them they disappeared or got locked up. :/
Love ya
Ps. If you update soon or anything I might not be able to read because I'm fucking busy with school. Soooo sorry.August 21st, 2011 at 05:07pm -
this is a really great story :)August 20th, 2011 at 12:32pm
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I really like this story its different but a good different(: i really love it that jimmy is alive in the story <3333 update soon please!!!August 20th, 2011 at 09:54am
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Loved the update! I wonder if Arianna and the other girls will ever find out the truth about the guys not actually being cops. It is really getting interesting I can't wait for more please update very soon!August 20th, 2011 at 03:57am
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great story so far!August 20th, 2011 at 03:40am
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Uh oh trouble in paradise for Matt and Arianna.
See Matt and the other guys keeping secrets from their girlfriend will backfire!
Arianna is already suspecting things from the way Matt is acting, not spending enough time with her and always busy than a normal cop!
Matt is really asking a lot from Arianna because she doesn't know about the dangers she will be in when the enemy find out about her and use her as leverage against them, same goes for the other girls.
Matt is really expecting Arianna do what he wants when she is very independent and she has a thing of trusting people too.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!August 20th, 2011 at 03:26am -
LOVED the update!! YAY and one for sing me a summer!? you know its a good day when theres two. you people are AWESOMEAugust 20th, 2011 at 03:17am
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Oh mysterious jobs. Can't waitAugust 18th, 2011 at 04:20pm
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Oh mysterious jobs. Can't waitAugust 18th, 2011 at 04:20pm
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Oh mysterious jobs. Can't waitAugust 18th, 2011 at 04:20pm
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Looking forward to more! <3August 18th, 2011 at 07:53am
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So I take it that the other girls don't like really like Lily.
I mean she is very quiet and she's not very social with them at all.
I believe that the guys have all their girlfriends fooled that they are police officers.
I also sense that Nina and Brian might be getting into more fights if Brian and the others keep leaving to deal with their business.
But it is freaking adorable how much Brian is protective if Nina!
I cannot wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!August 18th, 2011 at 06:51am -
that chapter was boss as, update soon :) both of you!August 18th, 2011 at 06:15am
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Loved the update!
You just know their real jobs are gonna get found out!
Can't wait for more! <3August 17th, 2011 at 02:55am -
I fucking knew it. I had this weird feeling that them being cops wasn't real.
I hope the guys do tell them. Or else they'll find out themselves and it'll be worse =\
Love yaAugust 16th, 2011 at 03:21am -
I knew something was fishy with the guys job since they all were in the same business together.
So they are actually into weapons and drugs, then they use being cops as a cover up?
Now that is very smart thought them losing that crate will possible bite them in butt later.
So Matt is deeply in love with Arianna that he wants to marry her but keep her away from the life he does.
I am so excited for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!August 16th, 2011 at 01:37am -
OMG what a great update! i loved the little look into matts life, cos well now i know what hes being sneaky about. :D update soon!August 15th, 2011 at 11:47pm
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