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  • Peeta Mellark;

    Peeta Mellark; (100)

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    Oh my gosh this literally made me want to cry. Just...oh my gosh this was incredibly beautiful.
    August 21st, 2011 at 03:12am
  • silk tea.

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    I really like this piece. It's very...intense and honestly, I wish there was more of it. I like the fear between the two characters and how the other one is trying so hard to be strong for the main character. It just works out so well and you've got a beautiful flow and vocabulary.
    July 20th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • waves wash

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    wow this was very mysterious.
    July 20th, 2011 at 01:58am
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