Time Of Dying - Comments

I love the Napoleon quote c:

And this was eerie and sad and I absolutely loved it. Its an interesting idea, and just pulled me in .

i really love it, the quote is amazing. So is the story it's really sad and gripping. Another good job:)

"Death is nothing, but to live defeated and inglorious is to die daily."
-Napoleon Bonaparte
Very very nice quote for the story :)
Other than that.. I LOVED IT!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY DID!! :D
I love the descriptions and the fact that you really made me feel like I was IN the story. I feel really bad for Charlee but geez.. her life sucked balls. :(
I love the whole plot on this.. it's the type of stories that you'd read once, twice than over and over and over :D
I don't know what else to say really, besides the fact that her mom was really harsh at how she told charlee that damien died, but besides that, I LOVED IT (FOR THE HUNDRETH TIME XD)

Oooohhh... creeeeepy!

That's really sad actually, that she lived her whole life afraid of dying, losing everyone around her, until she eventually died herself. That's no way to live!

Well written, good description and good dialogue :)