After All This Time - Comments

I love how you mix things up in this story! I love how Lily asks Remus on a date, I love how you have James and Sirius talking about James dating other girls and him considering it, and I love how you wrote the scene where James saves Severus! Honestly, I love ever bit of it! Please update soon!!

my heart broke for severus. and yeah sirius, smart words haha. i loved the update :)

I really like this, especially all the bantering.

the lily and severus part was cute. i do like their friendship. and the pain knowing he'll never get her haunts me. and headless nick telling james he just needed to change his ways is nice. like maybe that's how james' deflated his ego a bit and lily warmed up to him later hahaha.

Awe, poor Mary. I loved the was Sirius got all protective over her. Update soon please!

idk why but i teared up. who could do that to mary? and sirius is so protective and nice and ugh. i want that. i just love this story.

Poor Mary. I do love Sev, though. He's awesome! Your writing is, as always, amazing! Update soon please!

This story is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter :) I love how it shows almost all their point of views makes it a even better story. Hope you update soon!

That was gorgeous. I awed at the part where Snape thought about his love for Lily. They should be together. <3

my heart siriusly melted at the end with Snape and his love. lol i said siriusly because i forgot how to spell seriously correctly. not fixing, though. loved the update, the thank you lily gave and how she ran to the hospital wing for severus. i do love lily.

aw i loved it.
idk i'm kind of at a loss of words at the moment. not sure why.

Awesome chapter, I love the jump back to canon in amongst your fiction :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this!! I love how you're sticking to the facts, but also showing a different side of how the characters interpret the situations! And you're adding so much depth to my favorite characters! I'm a Snape fan, but I'm still happy with James/Lily because, you're right, without them, there'd be no HP, and JKR made it that way for a reason. I just love how you're showing that Snape isn't innocent in youth, like people thing!! Agghhh, I just love this!!

Wow. This. Is. AMAZING! Please update soon! :)

its always nice to have a bounce back to canon.
but this was nice. i felt so bad for remus. and marlene. aw.

Awesome update! Cannot wait for the next one. I'm loving the cuteness between the Marauders and their girlfriends. :)

i awed loudly.

Love love love this story!!!!!!! Update soon!

I've read the first chapter, and I'm loving it already. But that may be because I'm a huge Harry Potter fan, and have already developed understanding of the characters you've mentioned...As for Lily's first diary entry, it's good, but you repeated a lot of facts already. With a bit more description, this could be a wonderful fanfic :)

Haha poor Remus! At least his and Marlene's feelings for each other are out in the open now! I wonder what's going to happen next?
Great update, more soon please!