I love the closeness between Jensen and Dylan in this chapter - they could be a really cute couple. I hope that what happened at the restaurant turns out okay. I love everything about this chapter - can't wait for the next.
Maybe you should leave… you’re surrounded by lunatics
And practically the whole chapter make me laugh out loud. Should this chapter be hilarious or should I panic because my fave member of HU is in an abusive relationship?
This is a lovely story. I love how you use their real name in the story. There are some HU's fanfics that I read that use their stagename which for me seems a little unrealistic.I have a feeling that Rae has a crush on Danny. Aww... that's cute!
However, I think it's better if you put spacing in the paragraphs whenever you write the dialogues because it gets confusing when everything's mashed together.
Anyway, this is a great story and don't stop writing. ^_^