Could He Be My Mr. Wonderful? - Comments

This is a sweet story. I understand that its going through the editing process? Haha, there were a few things that I saw that could be corrected, but nothing a good looking over won’t fix.

Boy, I’ll have to come back, there’s so much to read!
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This is so sugary sweet and lovely and I just adore it. All I can recommend is tidying up your summary page, not having side-notes and stuff makes it appear more professional.

Other than that, I loved it! Keep writing! x

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First, I like your layout. Even though it's something that doesn't suit my taste; I still think it's neat and it doesn't distract the readers so kudos for that (:

I rarely like reading stories with first person POV's but your narration is nice and the plot is pretty cool! (: Keep up the good work (:

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Ok, So, I have no idea if Cameron is famous or not. I actually only read the first chapter. It's good, seems to rush into things quickly, but I bet it goes deeper and that's why. So, I see you have finished it and you seem to have quite a few people who love this. Good Job. :)

aww its over :( but you gotta love happy endings :)

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So I thought that your story is really good. Well written and organized, also your characters are well described something that I can’t do with mine. I always have trouble on this. Keep up the great writing and also if you have any writing tips I would appreciate it.

Loving this story :)

Loving this story :)

I really likes this story but I would change the summary a little so it's less confusing. This is just me, but if the summary is confusing I'm less inclined to read the story. But U did read and really enjoyed it! :)

Hey i was brought to this story by comment swap and let me tell you i'm so happy that it brought me to this story as i have fallen in love with it! I love Cameron anyway so this made your story easy to read and once i started to read it i just couldn't stop! Well done on a great story so far!

Aww Aladdin :) Great story!

Glad you updated! (:

she better say yes!

I like the new layout! (:

Hi I'm a comment swapper, I didn't know who Cameron was and the lack of a summary made it really hard for me to get into your story and I just kept getting confused. I'm really sorry but I only made it through the first chapter so sorry this is a useless comment.

la de da da about time he proposes to her.

I wonder how Erica will help

idk itd be nice to forgive her but wut she did was horreeble.

They shouldn't because of how many things she did to them. But I think they will

Aw it's a boy!