July 25th, 2008 at 04:07am
*kicks mibba*
:cheese: WHY HAS NO ONE BESIDES US COMMENTED THIS?
You deserve much more comments and reconition then you get :arms:
A Break From Reality - Comments
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February 25th, 2008 at 10:12pm
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Dont be hard on yourself, this is really good!
I like the words you used for it and its a really good one-shot.
And YAY PATRICK saved peterFebruary 24th, 2008 at 12:07am -
HOW DOES THIS HAVE NO COMMENTS?
I love. lo-lo-lo-love. (xD)
I may be able to cover up my shitty work with fancy words, but you are a genius. You can capture emotions and feelings so well.
I'm honored to know you
Screw you mozilla for not working D:
Internet Explorer doesn't have built in spell (I originally typed sound? O__O!) check. Rawr.
Anyway, ah!
LOVEFebruary 23rd, 2008 at 05:23pm
It's so beautiful and so tragik and so heartwrenching and it's such a glorious mix.
As always, your opening paragraph is fabulous. It really helps the fact that Pete is so sure that his idea is great hit home. It really shows how much he stands beside his plan, how devoted he is to it. It's great.
He always felt bad because Pete’s word deserved such a nicer voice. Pete thought Patrick’s suited the job perfectly.
This part was wonderful because it really showed what oppostite mindsets the two of them have. How Patrick thinks he's such a failure and Pete think's he's so perfect.
It’d take a fucking psychic (or maybe a psycho) to get what goes on in that kid’s head.
I really loved this part two, about the psychic and the psycho. It made me laugh. It's fits really well in the story because the rest is so serious, and this was like a light-hearted break. A light-hearted break from seriousity. [/intensely stupid attempt at a pun]
:lmfao
The ending was a bit rushed, but flawless. If that makes sense? Like, personally, I think Pete should've put up a bit more of a struggle since he was so, so set on his "perfect idea", but regardless, the ending was perfect; rushed or not.
Again, this is by far my favorites of yours. It reminds me so much of Dwayne from Little Miss Sunshine when he's telling Frank he wants to sleep and skip high school and stuff. Fabulous, my love.