@ Ragekage88 See the thing is, I wrote the sequel, but I hated it so I took it down, I've been tempted quite a few times to write a sequel, but I've never had the time nor inspiration to do so
I've noticed that you're very inconsistent with Nightmare's age. For instance, he'll be say, four and a half months old, and then you'll say something like "It's been two months and Nightmare is almost five months old", which is very confusing.
Awwww I loved reading this story so much! I was addicted as soon as I started reading, and, literally, didn't want to shut my laptop off until I fell asleep reading it! I loved any and everything in it!