We Should've Seen It Coming - Comments

This is great! Just amazing! I love it!

i cried which is saying alot, it touched my soul. just wow just just wow. i am speechless. wow

I don't know what to say. This was sad and uncomfortable and yet, somehow, beautiful.

I'm not going to lie I cried a little bit. This story was very moving and portrayed a lot of feelings I've felt in my own life. I definitely understand Blake's feelings when he tries to help Annabelle stay alive because personally I've been a similiar situation. It's terrifing and emotional and afterwards you never really turn out the same. Stuff like that effects people and I think you showed that perfectly. I admit, the ending line was my favorite. It made the story completely.

That was beautiful.

I..effin...cried.
This was absolutely amazing.
"The only difference between Annabelle's death and mine? no one is trying to rescue me."
That is what broke open the water gates. I mean honestly. To know that you tried to save someone's life and they died to suddenly become like them...And have no one try to rescue you? It's the biggest realization in the world. I loved this. Amazing. Heart-wrenching. Stunning.
xoxox
~Brias

Oh my... this has honestly been one of the few stories on here that kept me hooked from the beginning and just... kept it going throughout the whole story. I think you portrayed real emotions here, real sorrow, just the reality of it. That was a big point, the impact of the ending.

I like how the narrator isn't revealed 'till around the middle, and how the narrator actually isn't someone who was at all related to Annabelle. I thought that was a very, I don't know the word for it, very... good factor, haha.

Even though this is such a sad thing in life and something I don't read a lot really, you made this into a seemingly well thought out story that grabs the reader. I honestly loved this. Fantastic piece :')

SHIT, that was the most beautifuly written, sadest, most moving piece, I have ever read... it made me cry. That was so amazing, and so pure... I'm at lost for words, it was just that damn good
Thank you

JAzz <2+1

It's absolutely beautiful. It reminds me of Cyberbully movie, but this is way different. It's deep yet sad. People need to realize that they have to stop affecting and picking on them. It's ridiculous when it comes to bullying.

Written beautifully. It does not just show you the raw emotion, it makes you FEEL it.
Please continue. You have an amazing talent.

That was really creative, i loved how you said she was in him...I really loved the whole thing. (:

Thats a really moving story, I don't really know what to say because its not like i liked it, it mad em feel really uncomfortable but that what makes it so go and so moving