The Real Story of Heaven and Hell - Comments

Not a comment swap xD
Absolutely LOVE this story, fabulously written, little to no spelling or grammatical errors, the only issue I have with this story is... THE WAY IT ENDED!! Holy crap you are one cruel person Dx Also kinda a genius.. I'll definitely be reading the sequel :D

Comment swap!

I've never read an Avenged Sevenfold story before, but this was pretty good.
I picked a random chapter: Chapter 12, I think. The "Moth Drawn to Flame" one, or something like that.
I don't know why Sera was feeling the way she was, but you did a great job of describing the sadness. I loved that she went to Brian for comfort.

In fact, I even skimmed through the next couple of chapters just to see what would happen next. xp

My only real complaint was the spacing. Whoever wrote the chapters for Lil should space out the paragraphs so that it's easier to read.

Keep up the good work!

Comment swap. :)

I like the authors, but I think you guys should have gotten together more on the writing technique and what not. It's kind of hurting my head that the paragraphs are spaced out one chapter and not the next. XD

I really like the idea, it'd even be a good story without A7X (Don't take them out though, I like them)

I was honestly hooked on the story. I loved chapter 36, I couldn't stop reading it for a second.

The ending was fantastic.

Comment swap tole me to read this, and I have to say it was good. :] I haven't read an Avenged Sevenfold story in a reaally looooong time, but this was good. I liked the plot, but I wasn't very fond of the writing style either. It was a still a good story tho :]

Comment Swap Child here c: I'm sorry, I only read the first few chapters. These fantasy type stories aren't really my favorite. But i do have some likes and dislikes.

Likes:

*Avenged Sevenfold! <3 My favorite.
*Plot is different.. interesting.

Dislikes:

*The way your paragraphs aren't really separated.
*i'm sorry, but i'm also not fond with the way you write. It's not terrible, it just doesn't grip me in.

Don't feel bad about my comment though. I'm not really a hetero person, I like slash.
Good job though c:

found this story through comment swap and I couldn't seem to stop reading this. Before I knew it, I had finished it. I'm so freaking sad right now. I was completely thrown off when they died. And the guys....I feel so bad for them. All that lasted for about five seconds after seeing the sequel button. Tata for now. I'm going to go read the sequel. XP

This story was Sooo amazing!I enjoyed every single second of it and I really love who is with who :)!!!

Tears EVERYWHERE. This shit was amazing. My heart is aching for Brian and Jimmy. I can't even believe the girls are dead....so mind boggling.

This was such an awesome story. I'm going to miss the updates!

Can't wait to read more from you! xoxo

Ok...please say there's going to be a sequel!!??? Because Brian and Jimmy!! Poor boys... Don't let them alone please please please!!

You killed them BOTH?!?!? :-O boohiss!!! :( love the story canna wait for the sequel! <3

I am crying like a little baby right now because of this. Good Lord. This was fantastic.

OMFG YOU HAVE TO START WRITING THE SEQUEL ASAP!!!!

I loved this story, and now it must continue. If it ends there, I will go bang my head against the wall until you update the sequel.

So.

:)

I love this story alot.

Update please

poor Brian!! :( good chapter, despite the fact that Brian is alone, Sera is gone and Lil...poor Lil

I'm trying so hard not to cry in class. That chapter killed me!!!

I can't believe she's actually gone. I feel so bad for Lil...even more so for Brian. Ugh.

Good chapter, despite my feeling of depression.

Omg update ASAP Plz

That had better not be the end!! I'm gonna cry!! It was bloody awesome though!! ^_^ <3 xxxx

love it!! i wonder what Lilith saw?? omg! can't wait for the next update :)

OMG!!! I love Brian & Sera's relationship they are just so perfect for eachother and i just can't wait for the next chapters and i also enjoy so much jimmy and lil's relationship...i love jimmy, he means so much to me just like the other fans...is awsome that you are bringing him back with this story and thou i didn't meet him i feel like i do so thank you very much and keep updating 'cause i love your story <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 !!!