The Real Story of Heaven and Hell - Comments

I really hope next chapter is brains pov I want to know what he's thinking when he gets back from hell and sera isn't there .update soon!!!!!!!!

whoa. I knew she lovd Jimmy but that's BULLSHIT that she is turning her back on her sister. I mean Sera needs to grow some balls but that was just cold hearted. Sera needed her and she left with an asshole remark. Typical Lilith! hmmph! I NEED TO KNOW SERA'S POV! update soon :)
nice new layout btw :)
(it says the story is inactive? O__o)

Awww I loved the chapter and everything about it. I'll come out and admit that I liked how everyone used their powers. I seriously hope Jimmy is okay though. That's seriously really brave of Lil to go down to hell to attempt to get Jimmy back. I sure as hell would do that.

Can't wait for the next update. :-)

Good chapter :)
Ok. I'm mad with Lil, how could she do that to Sera?! Not cool :/ more soon though! I have to know what's going with Lil!

Good chapter :) Corny is...okay now :3
More soon!

Good chapter! More soon please!
In just too shocked that she may be realated to Corny! I'm on Lil's side on this one!!

O.O I did not see that coming, I'm not sure if I really believer her though

Wow I love this please update soon

I really do love this story. It's really good ^.^

I and a few friends believe that 'Fiction' is Jimmy's suicide note; look into some information? I want to see if you think the same.

This chapter was too short, man! It upset me :/ more like a filler

Ok, down to the good! I love how Fiction is in it and I really want her and Jimmy to be together while Sera is with Brian :) angel and a demon! Win-win! Ooh! And Corny gets shot in the face ;D that's my dream for the story xD haha somewhat..not all of it! The rest of my dream is only for me! Muhahahahahaha!

D'aw Lil is starting to like Jimmy :3
When I'm 18 I want to get sails on the back of my hand that lead to the opposite side of my wrist and to have it flow into a Jimmy deathbat. Though I may be too weenie to get it XD

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I freaking LOVE this story - keeps me on the edge of my seat for every chapter. With that aside, this chapter was really enjoyable. I loved all aspects, hell, I loved the whole thing. Can't wait for the next update. :-D

I absolutely loved this chapter! It made me laugh and smile! :D <---- like that!
Why can't Corny just die? I fucking hate her -.- Brian should have killed her! I hate how all the guys are in like freaking love with her! (except Brian cause he's smart!)
Finish her off soon :)
Love this! Keep it up! More soon! :)

Ohhh angry Brian :3 lol Corys a bitch

Loved the chapter :)
I FUCKING HATE CORY! screw her!
She needs to die...please? As a gift?!?!

hey i love it and i hate that corny bitch too lol anyway i love it i think i just said that... anyway cant wait for another update

I really don't like Cory and she gives off a bad feeling.

This is such a unique story. Where did you get the idea from?

i don't like the new chick