You need to stop jumping around because to be truthful, I have no Idea what's going on! The point of a story like this is to entertain an audience and not yOurself! What is the point of posting it on Mibba if you are confusing everybody. I don't know what's going on at the show, how you ended up running through an alley! you need to make things connect! Good luck with your next one and add more description!
July 26th, 2011 at 11:37pm
