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  • Backwoods_Juliet

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    What about Val's baby???
    March 24th, 2012 at 05:55am
  • shasha24

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    I'm sad it is a over but it was GREAT while it lasted!!!!!
    January 8th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • deactivatedError

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    Omg I can't believe it's finally over cute ending though :)
    January 8th, 2012 at 04:15am
  • crazyforhim07

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    i love you story and i am sorry about your granddad
    November 30th, 2011 at 01:49am
  • Burgerat20

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    wooo!
    November 16th, 2011 at 02:52pm
  • Jorel Decker.

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    You have a lot of grammar and spelling errors. You also need to use better paragraphs and maybe make the font smaller? It would be much easier to read. And also, to me, the layout is an important thing when it comes to picking a story to read. The layout for this story doesn't seem to match the actual story itself.

    Just a little constructive criticism. (:
    October 26th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • Burgerat20

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    AHHHH!! she is gonna die
    October 21st, 2011 at 03:32am
  • Burgerat20

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    AHHHH wth??!!
    October 16th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • Burgerat20

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    OMFG!!!! i love this. i just found it and sat here and read the whole thing
    WOW keep going
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • trulyyours

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    O its sam lost the baby qood chapter tho , update soon . !
    September 8th, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • trulyyours

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    I Love This STORY Keep Goinq Update Soon . !
    September 2nd, 2011 at 04:12am
  • londonnative

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    Loving your story!! Can't wait to read more!
    September 2nd, 2011 at 01:35am
  • shasha24

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    There was lot of anger at the end. Matt's goig to make it up and quick!!!
    August 30th, 2011 at 05:07am
  • young'lovee

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    I thought i wouldnt.like this story but i love it
    August 29th, 2011 at 05:46am
  • holleycarb1296

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    Loved it! soo good!
    August 29th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • Brian Haner Snr.

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    Thank you all so much for commenting!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 02:48am
  • cindycannibal

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    Love this story alot. More please
    August 23rd, 2011 at 12:03am
  • misunderstoodme

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    Gosh I'm the only one giving comments now. But oh I don't care. Love the Christmas chapter.
    August 22nd, 2011 at 06:21pm
  • misunderstoodme

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    It just keeps getting better and better. Congrats on your tattoo shop :: :) ::
    August 22nd, 2011 at 02:26am
  • misunderstoodme

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    Love this new chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!!
    August 19th, 2011 at 04:44am
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