Sorry I'm "Taken"... - Comments

  • misunderstoodme

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    Wow! I love this story. There's a lot of mixed emotion in it. It's hilarious sweet heart warming and more. Please keep posting :-)
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:07am
  • xxZacky_Vengeancexx

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    I like it can't wait to see more
    August 8th, 2011 at 12:08pm
  • Asaelen

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    Great job! Can't wait to see another chapter up!
    July 31st, 2011 at 12:23am
  • holleycarb1296

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    haha Loved it! as usual! get well soon!
    July 28th, 2011 at 06:06am
  • holleycarb1296

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    haha i love this story! is so good!
    and for Brian Girlfriend...
    Name: Jessica-Nichole Lynn Ferrana-Sixx (daughter of Nikki Sixx, but if you don't want her to be someone famous her last name could be Knight!)
    Nicknames: Jess, Jessi, Jessica, Nik, Nichole, J.N., Nikki
    Looks: 5'10'' Long legs that look like they could go on forever with brown loose curly hair and deep brown eyes
    age: 21
    Birthday: December 2nd
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • Brian Haner Snr.

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    Writing Now :')
    July 24th, 2011 at 12:33pm
  • Asaelen

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    Good gosh xD I love it when he asks if she would stand by his ugly ass xDD I know I probably put that wrong, but I still love it xDD Update soon
    July 24th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • deactivatedError

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    Story sounds amazing can't wait for more!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 05:33am
  • Brian Haner Snr.

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    Thanks Allot :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 03:05am
  • Brian Haner Snr.

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    Thanks Alot :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 03:05am
  • Asaelen

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    Okay xD Good luck and I subscribed
    July 21st, 2011 at 02:48am
  • Brian Haner Snr.

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    I'll Take that Into Account Tomorrow :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 02:40am
  • Asaelen

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    It's really good, but I just wanted to know if you ever thought of splitting up the paragraphs... and when a new chara starts talking to give them there on paragraph...? I really like your story, but it is hard to follow with it all flowing together like that.
    July 21st, 2011 at 02:39am