Austin's Ambrosia - Comments

I'm subscribing to this, see this is why I love comment swap. I'd probably never have read this before. I am in love with this. Your characters are just so interesting! Your writing is beautiful and just perfect. I am so glad I had to read this! :)

I love the layout as well so simple but so pretty as well. I can't wait to read more! :D

I really enjoyed the first chapter. It left me wanting more. The writing is very flowing and nice to read and the character of Austin intrigues me. I encourage you to write more! P.S. I really like your layout!

thanks!

This story is so different to other ones I have read. I doesnt have a clear story line but it seems to pull me in anyways. Maybe it's how realistic the characters seem to be. Your layout is so simple yet beautiful.
I hope you update soon :)

I like Austin and his politeness. I like his logic and his smoking habits and his thought processes.

I like Amber and her adorable shyness. I like how she stumbles across her words and I like how Austin admits he doesn't understand her.

I even like London, because she speaks her mind and she seems like she doesn't give a shit what people think of her.

Overall, you do a wonderful job at characterization in this. And your dialogue is so wonderful to read. <3
I hope you update this soon!

If you promise to update, I promise to read. ;]

This pulled me in even though it's so short! Let me tell you missy, I don't read short. I love long! So how is it I'm still here? ;] You are an awesome writer. I already like Amber and Austin. (Not a big surprise though haa)

I love the simplicity of this. Refreshing.

More please? Subbing. :3

I love your layout, it's so neat and beautiful. The picture, font and everything just work perfectly. Only thing is just that I would make the font size just a little bigger and the story set in the center but other than that, it's superb. I like your summary, you don't mention any names which make it even more mysterious and the reader knows just enough about the story to be intrigued to read on. :D

Your writing style is very elegant yet easy to read, your descriptions are so wonderfully vivid and it really helps make your sentences flow so nicely. I like how you described Austin's smile, it's very distinctive and already the reader is getting a clear picture of what his smile looks like. :D Amber seems a bit uptight but oh God, I'm loving Austin already! He seems so jokey and carefree, aha!

Wonderful job (:

did i tell you this is perfection bbygirl?
your writing style puts mine to shame, it's so easy to follow and stream of thoughtlike. i'm dying to see what's next in this. i'll give you a better review when i'm not writing four stories at once, i swear <3