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Damn! That was pretty hot, even though it was so short. Like MusiclMasochist said, your descriptions are so amazing! I think that's what makes all your stories. With the Frikey, it's the violence. With the Doctor Who it's the sexual frustration, or just frustration in general for the Doctor and Rory. :D Great job!

You had me at "parabolic curve".
Oh my god, this is amazing, and your descriptions are great!
I love the Faulkner sentence idea too. And you do it so well!
God, this comment sucks; please excuse me.

I AM DEAD. YOU HAVE KILLED ME WITH THE HOTNESS. WHY IS THIS NOT ON THE SHOW. WHY. WHY IS DOCTOR WHO NOT ALIEN PORN. WHY. UNGH. I AM MORE THAN DEFINITELY READY FOR MORE SOON.

Okay, okay, I will say something mildly intelligent about this and that's that I kind of love how forward Rory is in this and how he seems to take control of their relationship because I LOVE dominant!Rory and I am a firm, firm believer in submissive!Eleven. I genuinely just love this though and I am amazed again by how you managed to get so much across in one sentence. I love the details, I love that the sheets are blue, I love the mathematic imagery SO MUCH and, ugh, it's just so powerful and raw and perfect and I love this even more than the first one. (Also, this is not related to anything at all but the picture in the banner is kind of my favourite of them ever, so. )

I'm dying here.
There are no words, dear word, I think I'm drooling. No I'm not, I checked, but it's a close call. ;D
This is fantastic - it's written beautifully, it flows like poetry, and your vocabulary only adds to the effect of the whole thing.Cannot believe I just phrased it like that.

I approve. Of everything, and anything. I don't think I'll ever be able to watch Doctor Who in the same way again. I guess that means you've done your job well.

Things that make Rory moan like a filthy whore. Just this.