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  • fallingwithoutwings

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    Ronald is being such a twat. He needs to stop and take that stick out of his arse!
    Another excellent chapter! I always get so excited when I see the wee little email updates on my phone! it just makes me want to rush down and start reading.
    I'm glad they decided to take it slow and I cannot wait for that dinner!
    August 20th, 2011 at 04:54pm
  • doctor-optimus

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    I love it, keep it up! :D
    August 20th, 2011 at 09:42am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    RON'S JUST JEALOUS BECAUSE I DON'T LOVE HIM!!!! hahahahahaah my ego is quite big tonight.

    and this made me smile like an asshole.
    August 20th, 2011 at 09:19am
  • Lexi Wombat

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    Awwww this chapter was so cute ^-^ In regards to Ronald's arse, I'm guessing he got into a fight with Hermione or something. I wanna read moreeeee (:
    August 20th, 2011 at 08:43am
  • Lexi Wombat

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    THIS. IS. AMAZING.
    It honestly is, and I can't wait for them to really get together ;D hehe.
    More soon, I hope ^-^
    August 19th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • JustThinking

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    this is going to get twisted and complicated isn't it? óther than that, your story is as lovely as ever=) and I hope for even more soon.
    August 16th, 2011 at 10:59am
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    Oh those two are so love struck it's adorable!
    Though I completely understand how difficult it must be and how difficult it will be in the near future but I have total faith their both strong enough to work it out :)
    Brilliant chapter once again and I definitely cannot wait for more!
    August 15th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    WOMAN.
    i like gemma.
    that is all.

    but i feel bad for george.
    August 15th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    Thanks for the shout out dude! Haha and this was a heart twister; thanks! Hahhaha
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    Doesn't firewhiskey just bring on the greatest situations?
    I'm so excited that Maize and George are starting to get to know each other (in more than one way ;) ) but I felt so bad for her in the end. That would've been such a hard situation to be in espeically since you've liked the boy for so long! But she is definitely a bigger person for it!

    I def would've read this chapter sooner if it weren't for the horrors of work though it did make me quite happy to come home and have something so delightful and amazing to read !

    I cannot wait for more !
    I absolutely adore your story :)

    p.s.
    Thank you so much for the sweet acknowledgment in your Author's Note :)
    August 11th, 2011 at 04:06am
  • mellybel1333

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    Still love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 10th, 2011 at 08:55am
  • JustThinking

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    so for startes I like to say that I love the new layout (just thought it should be said) and I can't wait to read about their adventures with an old friend called Alcohol! xD well anyways, this is as brilliant as ever and I can't wait for even more! :D
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    I'm really, really glad there was a line up. George needed that and I'm so happy the shop is back up and running.

    Oh alcohol! Alcohol makes such interesting tales occur, doesn't it? ;) haha

    Another brilliant chapter and I cannot wait for the next one!
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:36pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    so um, you know how in prisoner after draco gets attacked by buckbeak and he's like "it's killed me" ?

    yeah. george, you just killed me.
    fuck.
    my face.
    so many smiles.
    August 7th, 2011 at 10:19am
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    reading some of these comments make me smile.
    BECAUSE MY GEORGIE IS SO GOOD AT WRITING :) :)

    but um this was nice. yep i read most of this earlier tho hahahahahahaha but um, i'm glad that ron wants to make both fred and george proud. aw.
    August 5th, 2011 at 02:43am
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    The new layout is wonderful, very eye-catching but still easy to read.
    As for the story, I don't know how you do it but you always have this emotion hanging on every line. The way you portray feelings and dialogue is brilliant and one day I hope I am as good a writer as you are :)
    August 5th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • JustThinking

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    brilliant as ever, I don't know what to write as a comment right now.. so it'll probably be a lot of rambling or a short comment.. I keep getting surprised of how much feeling there is in this story. I don't know if it makes any sense (it did in my head..) but this is so well written, that you can see and feel the pain as you read (I really hope I make any sense. because at the moment I am not that sure.) and I simply can't wait to read more.
    July 31st, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • fallingwithoutwings

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    Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant :)
    I was rather excited to see a new chapter was up and I definitely cannot wait for more!
    You have me HOOKED !
    July 31st, 2011 at 07:43pm
  • b6661m

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    This is completely fabulous. I love it a lot. It's probably one of my favorite Harry Potter fandom stories that I've ever read. You are a wonderful writer! :3
    July 31st, 2011 at 05:56am
  • Carry On Winchester

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    i totally made up the using of eeylop's owls too mahaha.
    i forget where but i did!!!!!
    oh yeah that thing i wrote on tumblr.

    oh btw, george, thanks for bringing me in and OH DAMN THAT FRED FOR NEVER SAYING ANYTHING TO ME!!!!!!! lol the problems i have....
    July 31st, 2011 at 05:48am