This is so lovely! I've always wondered what would of Harry's life been like of things had gone the Longbottom way. This was a lovely answer to my question. Everything was well written and had great imagery. Good job Dezz :)
This is wonderful! I love Harry Potter fanfics that are actually realistic and have a point to them, instead of just being useless ramblings by the author. This is like... Harry Potter meets Inception.
I caught one typo at the end: Harry watched as the scene around his dissolved. His should be him obviously.
But wow... I'm astonished. You're a great writer. I can't believe this doesn't have a bazillion comments! But that's life, I suppose. Anyway, great job. It's always nice to see actual talent on this website ._.
Everything was well written and had great imagery. Good job Dezz :)