Of Seduction, Deception and Horcrux in Griffindor - Comments

I must admit, I was never really fond of Harry Potter until I read this! I read all the chapters of this so far, and all I can say is that you have earned yourself a subscriber!
I have to agree with some people who have comented, this could use a bit more description. But other than that, I honestly am quite pleased!
One question... Who's Ginny?

oh my my my. i got depressed when i read on my subscriptions that it was inactive, but then i double-checked and it said active. I just adore this story and Tiara's personality.
I can't wait for her to get to Hogwarts :3
P.S. George is my favorite to ! ♥

I like this so far. I loved all of your characters' personalities. Can't wait to read more. :]

I like your story so far! It's kind of weird to see my name attached to someone other than me, but cool too. I suppose people with regular names get that all the time. It's nice to see the story continued beyond the end of the series - I'm excited to read more! :)

This is really really good!! When I was reading it I pictured the whole thing in my head. Keep up the amazing work!! =D

I like the beginning! Subbing, can't wait to read more! I really like the names you used for Luna's kids :)

I really liked this, thanks for telling me about this story! Could you try putting spaces between dialogue and paragraphs? I think it'd be easier to read. I really liked the plot so far. =) Please update soon.

I really liked it! Marvelous! :D

I love how this story is starting out! It seems like it will be a good story to read. I liked your descriptions. Can't wait for the next chapter.

:D Wonderful new chapter. I really liked the new characters.

I like how you started this, it sounds like it will be good to read. :)

Hmmm I think you have something going on here :))

I like it, i think it should be continued when you get the chance

I really liked this. The only things that I can suggest are to add a little more description of the kitchen, and I was a bit curious as to why Pavia is hesistant to go to Hogwarts. Was there any reason besides the fact that she doesn't want to go to a boarding school? Other than that, it's perfect as it is. (:

I subbed! Liking it so far! :D

I like where this is going.(:
Can't wait for the next chapter, sweetie !
I subbed.♥

Seems interesting so far O_O :)

Oh yeah and I forgot to add that you should may be try working on the setting a little more, Helps the reader picture things more. I always have trouble with that part too x.x.

I liked how the way you described things, but always remember when you want make your story flow better read the story's backwards sentence by sentence. It always help me out if I made any spelling errors and such. I hoped my criticism helped you in any way. :)

Can't wait till' your next chapter.

pretty good, but can you just put spaces between dialogue, kinda hurt my eyes! [: