A World of Fiction - Comments

Oh, this is just...this is just so beautiful.
It's so honest and real and I can't even describe how this made me feel.
Your writing is just so beautiful.

Dru.. If only you knew how much you truly are, if only because you aren't afraid to strip yourself down and say what most of us are feeling. Of all the people I know, in RL or on here, you are definetely the one who deserves better. And I know you'll get it.

The First One. Amazing how I know exactly were you're coming from. Amazingly Beautiful =)

adrianna is right. If anyone deserves to be saved, it's you, Dru. You're my hero. These are so amazingly beautiful. Poetry. I wish you all the happiness in the world, darling. <333

From how I read this, the words were rushed and I liked it a lot, the rushing of the words. I don't know if that's how you intended it, but in my mind that's how I read it.
The last lines I quoted were probably my favorite-ests.
My favorite lines:

and they come hard.

But the words aren’t coming from his mouth, they’re coming from yours. Talking to yourself. Talking, talking.

And your mom told you once that Tylenol would kill you. Not Ibuprofen, but Tylenol. And there’s Tylenol in your bag.

It’s in your bag and you can’t. And your arm, your arm is bleeding again. It’s bleeding again. And you’re crying again, underwater, can’t breathe. And he’s talking, your talking, everyone’s talking.

It's Dark.

I like how you wrote this, the tone, I believe. The sentences are simple, but not simplistic, and, from my perspective, that makes them better.

My favorite lines:

I didn’t think being wrong could be possible. Not yet, not now, not this.

I know it’s illogical to be honest with someone you’ve never spoken to, but there’s not much that’s sensical about me.

(Do you remember that chapter?)

Use them for my own personal comfort, yes. Believe them, no. Somehow on the stepping stones between the two I got lost.

Update.Nonsensical Impossibilities.

Dru, these are beautiful, and heart-wrenching, and tragic, and everything else I can think of.

They're amazing.
You're amazing.

Empty wishes.

I like the specifics you choose.
My favorite lines:

I want to be the one who catches you when you trip

I want to kiss the cuts and scars away.

I want to be the reason you don't need that razorblade anymore.

I want to be your mad tea party, your ruby slippers, your blackbird.

I want to be the prayer that you don't pray.

Update.

Wow...
Just wow.

It's like a big reality check. Even though everyone (everyone that has an opinion worth caring for, anyway) on here loves you, your life still isn't all happiness and rainbows.

But, one day it will be.

One day you will know Ryan and Brendon and they will be able to save you. They'll be able to hug you and kiss you and make you smile when your feeling sad.
They'll meet you and it'll all just...fit. They'll know they need you and you need them.
It just...has to happen. If there's anything fair left in this world it will happen.

But who knows, right? I mean, maybe I'm just saying that so I won't have to give up on my dreams of being "saved".
I don't know, but I have the feeling that's not the case.

If anyone deserves to be "helped" or "saved", it's definitely you. And I don't even know who you are.
You just deserve it. You deserve everything you need to be happy.
They should be honored that you need them.

And I do hope Ryan and Brendon liked it.<3

My favorite lines:

There is no merit in a world of fiction when you're living it, when you can't close the book and end it.

when he's missing and put him on speaker so you and I can talk to him and tell him we love him.

I might cry red here, but the red is beautiful

And here's a secret: I don't love you there either, only in this world of fiction.

Caustic.:

There was...a postsecret with this text, wasn't there?

Yes, there was. Scanned from my journal where the original was hand-written at 1 am during The Sauce rerun commercials.

There was...a postsecret with this text, wasn't there?
It's...almost lyrical. Nearly. I don't know what it's meant to be [therefore I'm taking a stab in the dark], but.
Yes. Bad sentence. Just to know I've read it, because it's irritating when something is read and not commented on.
Mibba loves you, Dru.

New non-fiction "series" by me.
Ficlets, drabbles, and one-shots.
All reflections, mainly on Dreamworld and my sickness.
Wouldn't fit with Conversations in Dreamworld or Seven Words to Break a Heart.

xoxox
-Dru