This is very interesting you should I really like the whole other than the fact that Jimmy is going to hurt in the end no matter what but still great can't wait for more :D
Hmmm... -Scratches nonexsistent stubble- I'm indifferent about this story. Given that there's only one chapter, you have nothing to worry about ^ - ^ I'll most likely end up craving more. Like, literally, I'll be drooling and staring at the computer screen until my eyes sizzle to a depressing end until you update kind of craving. I can tell there's going to be loads of drama. Which is just what I eat up :D! Soo.. Yeah..! -Flails arms slowly- Well.. This is getting awkward. Update soon, yeah?
This should be interesting Jimmy loves Matt Matt loves Zacky who just so happens to be Brian, his best friend's boyfriend Something is going to happen at the party I see it all blowing up in Matt's face and maybe a beat down from Brian later on Good first chapter Can't wait for more *subscribes* Update soon :}