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  • iheartzackyvengeance

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    Congrats to you! Great chapter as well. Can't wait for the next one! :)
    August 30th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    akdfjlasd;jflaksjdf;asdk *grabs into a hug* CONGRATULATIONS HUN!!!!!! *throws confetti* SO MUCH HAPPINESS IN LIFE AND THE STORY!!!!!
    August 29th, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • megan20089

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    Love it. :)
    August 29th, 2012 at 02:13pm
  • shadowed gates

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    Yay!!!! Congrats on the engagement :) How cute!!
    I love this chapter really sweet, i still really love this story thanks for updating! :)
    August 29th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • october-ninja

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    Aww your getting married =^.^=
    and Brian haveing that sex flash back was funny
    August 29th, 2012 at 05:52am
  • I feel insane

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    I second that! Congrats on your engagement, and I hope for a happy future for you and your fiance! Very Happy

    That was a really sweet chapter ^.^ Looking forward to seeing them make new memories Naughty
    August 29th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • Tattoo

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    Congrats on your engagement :D
    Thanks for updating <3
    August 29th, 2012 at 05:14am
  • I feel insane

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    Not surprised it was Kale, but thank God they're all ok :)
    And I loved the adorable ending to the chapter ^_^ Great job!
    August 28th, 2012 at 06:21am
  • aureanephthys

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    OMG I loveeed this so much. I remember just surfing for stories and this is by far my favorite A7X story
    August 27th, 2012 at 01:01am
  • GypsyRoseLee

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    Aaawwwww! Brian's starting to remember!
    On another note:stupid Kale and Michelle!!!
    August 26th, 2012 at 06:44pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Haha justice I knew it was tht asshole Kale and thn on top of tht horrid bitch Michelle was working with him like seriously bitch u left Brian and Kale was gay for Brian and obviously he didn't want neither of u so he got with Zacky and u got jealous and planned his killin, Zacky's and the kids killin and Matt, Mattie's and baby Kage's killing but tht didn't work quite well did it becuz u bastards got caught and r goin to jail and ur other partner is six feet under soo yea u lose and Kale is goin to jail for a long time especially if he is sexually assulting Jared which I believe he is cuz he is a gay pedophile but won't admit it I mean seriously "if I can't have u thn no one else can" yea gay amd psycho and on top of tht u was alone in the bathroom with Jared with ur handle in places it shouldn't be yea pedo as well but I'm glad tht Matt, Mattie, Zacky, Brian, Bentley, Jared, and Kage r safe and unharmed well other than Matt and Mattie, but Brian remember something about Zacky and tht really sweet and they kissed yay, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 26th, 2012 at 05:55pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    the ending was just the cutest and made me happy because Brian remembered something!
    August 26th, 2012 at 11:27am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    the ending was just the cutest and made me happy because Brian remembered something!
    August 26th, 2012 at 11:27am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    I KNEW IT. I KNEW IT WAS KALE'S SLIMY ASS. KNEWWWW IT.
    August 26th, 2012 at 11:21am
  • Tattoo

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    I'm glad they're all okay :)
    Thanks for updating <3
    August 26th, 2012 at 06:30am
  • Brian.xtc

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    You had me yelping and half screaming while I read this, its way past silent hour at my apartment, I thought for sure that my roommate was going to smother me with a pillow. But that's okay, I adored this chapter; as I do the rest. I'm very sad for the boys on how sad things have been, I was glad that there was at least a little happy in this one. Great job, and update soon. :) Stay Fabulous!
    August 26th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • october-ninja

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    Why cant people just leave them alone
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:00am
  • Synyster Halo6661

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    Ur gonna make me cry from all the bad things!!!!!!!!!!

    Happier next chapter please?! I'm begging u!
    August 26th, 2012 at 02:37am
  • megan20089

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    Love it. :)
    August 26th, 2012 at 02:26am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    AMAZING STORY!!!!!
    I wasn't sure about it at first but I thought I would give it a read and see if I liked it...Well, I LOVE this story and It's just amazing!
    Happy moments. Sad moments. Loved all of them!!
    Glad Brian is regaining his memory little by little.
    Please please pppllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssseeeee don't let anything bad happen. Both couples should be happy!! :D
    Sorry for the long ass comment. *shutting up now*
    August 25th, 2012 at 04:23am