Phosphenes - Comments

I love this!

I love how she second guesses herself a lot and the way you write her character is so interesting. Tom seems adorable and just... gahhh

keep going :)

Seriously, Casey? Seriously?! It was great. And why is Tom so darn adorable? And why do I feel like this should actually be happening? And why are you such a perfect human being for writing this?

Oh my sweet baby jesus. PERFECTION. Seriously. And this part: "It was like France was your secret lover, or something." The most perfect line I've ever read. I love it and, as always, am seriously jealous that it isn't happening in real life.

Perfect meeting. Honestly Casey, I'm in awe. And I feel like you've captured Tom perfectly. My only problem: Why is this not really happening?

Casey! This is really happening! Oh my god, I love it. I'm intrigued and patiently waiting for the next part.