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  • orlando weeks.

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    I love this!

    I love how she second guesses herself a lot and the way you write her character is so interesting. Tom seems adorable and just... gahhh

    keep going :)
    December 26th, 2011 at 06:48am
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    Seriously, Casey? Seriously?! It was great. And why is Tom so darn adorable? And why do I feel like this should actually be happening? And why are you such a perfect human being for writing this?
    December 22nd, 2011 at 09:15am
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    Oh my sweet baby jesus. PERFECTION. Seriously. And this part: "It was like France was your secret lover, or something." The most perfect line I've ever read. I love it and, as always, am seriously jealous that it isn't happening in real life.
    December 20th, 2011 at 08:57am
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    Perfect meeting. Honestly Casey, I'm in awe. And I feel like you've captured Tom perfectly. My only problem: Why is this not really happening?
    October 16th, 2011 at 05:22am
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    Casey! This is really happening! Oh my god, I love it. I'm intrigued and patiently waiting for the next part.
    October 13th, 2011 at 07:30pm
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