It is a good story, I like where your ideas are going, but I would also like to see some more detailed descriptions on things, even if they are just simple things. Wow, that's such a nice statement, Gerard has to kill Frank for his pride and so that he will not be too disgusted with himself. I must say that was very giggle worthy. =] thank you for your recent update! I appreciate it!
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