You Can't Tell Me to Heal - Comments

So good!

I hope her mom is going to be okay. And I really don't like her dad, he seems like a mean jerk. Bleh, update soon? :)

Ah! I want to know why she has to go to the hospital! Cannot wait for the next chapter. :)

That was... unexpected. But I liked it.
So intense though, at the end. Arogheriogheriog

Those last few chapters were awesome. I'll give you a real comment when i have the time.

This story has seriously become one of my favorites! <3 :)

Thank gosh she wasn't extremely stubborn.
I love this.

I would have been so disappointed if you had ended it then. Glad you changed your mind.
I hope she goes back soon, her and John need to talk it out. Hahaha:)

Goodness. I have a feeling that shit is going to hit the fan. Haha:) Can't wait to see what is going to happen next! :D

SORRY D: I MEANT GIRLFRIEND BECAUSE SHE IS NOT A BOY. O-O

OMFG! SHE NEEDS TO TELL HIM THAT ERIC TELLS HIS FRIENDS THAT SHE'S HIS BOYFRIEND BECAUSE THEN JOHN IS GONNA THINK SHE'S A SLUT D:

love it! update soon please.
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Their date was so cuuuute! Haha:) Can't wait for the next update. :)

this is really nice, i like it a lot

Can't wait to read what happens on their date! :D

I love the new chapters. Spiffy. Avery is finally breaking out of that hard shell and John is just too fucking cute, I loved it when you had john sing her to sleep in the ambulence and then againt at his house. I swear i went squee! Although i hate the fact that she can't just admit she likes him because we all know she does.
The fact that she watched him while he was in just his boxers proves it (though why he was half naked in front of her after her almost rape I will never know)
That last chapter was funny with him kissing her in her sleep then calling himself a creeper. I almost died when he said that i swear. And when he said to shannon
{i}two words, friend. lagoon. i busted out laughing.
The only part i hated was when Halvo and Avery were on the phone. And that's only cause at that point i felt like she was just stringing John along. Also, how John can;t figure out that the guy o the other end of the phone is Halvo is beyond me but i guess that's all part of the magic yeah?Anywyas, great story.
Peace.

this is nice. please update soon C:

wow i love the story. and how you make john so incompitent with girls haha, cause a lot of guys are actually like that. Avery seems pretty chill and i like that you didn't make her fall immediatly for John (or Halvo) because that's what always happens in these stories, and i like it that you switched it up.
This is the first heterosexual story that I've read on this site that i actually really really like. So please update soon (sorry for the long ass comment) because i am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Peace
Oh and you are a really good writer so i hoped maybe you would read one of my stories and give me some feedback, cause that would be like, super fly. Just had to say that haha

I love it, but I think you bold a little too much. It gets a little annoying. Otherwise, it's fantastic.

hey chica...excellent storyline. you have me hooked. ;-). and your question whether or not you were doing something right...i don't mean to be critical buuuttt.....i think...well..you weren't doing something right...sorry...i just think...you were doing something GREAT!!!!! :-p...keep writing mi amiga. i think u can go far...