Concrete Angel - Comments

This is really good! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, great chapter. I liked, no, loved it. I hope you up date again soon......PLEASE HURRY OR ILL EXPLODE!!!! xD xD xD Anyways, i like youre POV and how you describe things. I especially like how you described youre walk home-"Especially how the wind hits the trees" or somthing like that. Anyways, love you and keep it up!

-hugs- I remember when you told 'bout that. Ohmibob, love your story. =D Iunno, I suck at commenting... >___> <___< Comment love.

Make-Up Stains:

i really like it it might have to be one of my favorite stories and i have to agree with arianna on this that it must be tough to write this.

Arianna is always right :file:

I like how the story's progressing. Like how she's mean, then nice. Not like meanmeanmeanmean.

I loved the description of the calm of her walking. It gave my tummy butterflies of joy the way everything was all happy and good.

So we played for a few hours. He beat me all those five times we played, and I didn't even go easy on him. I just naturally suck at board games.
:tehe: Haha.
((Candyland? Where oh where could you have gotten that idea? -cough cough-MYINTOXICATION-coughcough-))
((and I am so not trying to be all RHCP with the double parenthesis :shifty))

I love this story. I'm kinda sad to see it continue, though. I mean, we all know what's gonna happen.

i really like it it might have to be one of my favorite stories and i have to agree with arianna on this that it must be tough to write this.

Kake likeies Stepha!!!
Its good and I wanna read more.
But theres not more, yet.
:) Please write more!

Wow, I'm really proud of you.
Writing a story about this must be tough.

I liked how you wrote it, though. The description of the dinner scene was great. I could picture a small family arguing and the little boy complaining about the meal.

-gives you gigantic hug-
It was good, you should write more.
I won't force you, though.

(P.S If it's any constellation, I almost peed myself of joy when I found out you wrote a new story xD)

damn thats good! -subcribes-

GREAT STORY!!!!! Please write next chapter soon!!!! <3 <3

Squee! We have a snow day today. YAY!!! -throws snow balls at you!-

hehe!!