As you've known me for long enough, you know that I am unable to make a good comment on such material, so I will just stick with the safe "well done" comment.
LOVED! I started to read this... then I kinda forgot about it ;D Sorry! oooh and Alex and Mattie make a good couple! I'm glad she beat up Mandi too, she totally deserved it!!
I don't know how to properly express the feelings that I feel right now! Just- *le meaningless hand gestures* For now I think this will do: FUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *takes a deep breath*
*le chuckles* Mandy got just what she deserved, that motherfreaking cow-hater! She obviously hasn't seen any films; she should've known not to mess with Alex's family -.-' *le shakes head*
Mwhahaha! Me gusta Matt y los chicos! Y me gusta tu historia! ...why is it that I always write something in Spanish whenever I comment on your story?
Well yeah. Anyway! I love itttttttt! I love it so freaking much! And no, I'm not writing any bullshit then removing it >:) I'm just writin an awful lot, and thanks to you, I have even more to write :D But this wasn't relevant to the story.
What I like about this story is that you keep it down to earth and simple! There's no confusing shit happening, the story isn't rushing, the language is very good indeed! :D Your characters are believable and it's easy to love them :D
The rage of the cliffhanger has gone over to pure amazement (if thats a word) over how good the story is, hope to god you arent planing on getting the psycho back into the story, almost punched my own screen here x)
Do you know that it is hilarious to sit here and laugh and giggle, and just... straight out make you frustrated? x) Anyhippopotamus, Alex is freaking awesome! She's hardcore! That guy totally got what he deserved. And her grandmother... she's the stereotypical old-people assholes that are all around. The ones judging you by your looks. *shivers* Me gusta los chicos! They're so protective of her, it's so sweeeeeeeet! *le smileyface* Love your story! *smiles widely, does the dance*
Do we really have to wait an entire freaking week for the next part? That cliffhanger is just too much. I am not amused about it unless you post the next one soon, my head is already starting to explode!
you're mean. Not so sure if I wanna come to your house next weekend if you're gonna be bad >: ( But then again... maybe I shouldn't say such things, payback's a bitch, haha..
I cant put any good words together to create a decent comment, but for the sake of commenting I will say this: THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME SHIT RIGHT THERE!!!
Tnawe! They're together, that's so cute! :D Been waiting for it for ages! Damn! And Alex is nice to her sister, when she feels like it, haha. She gave them keys to her house! Now, that's trust! Dayumn! Jimmy was funny :') "I just eat." x) I laughed hard :D (I find myself laughing very hard of your story - there are so many moments that I relate to and that could've been something you and I could've done x))
And that licking all over his burger... Relate-able much!!! I love your story, you're so God-damn good at writing! You keep it down on earth and obviously relate-able! You describe things well, I mean, it's more like I'm there, watching them, instead of reading of them! I'm your number one fan! :D
Love the new layout! It's freaking awesome! Why are you so good at making them? :( Mine sucks :p
Anyway! I know that crossing the eyes, while on eye is all over the place! You're so awesome :') And two updates in one day?!?!?! That was like.... having Avenged Sevenfold on an island with us (a) ! And at the same time riding fluffy, black, sparkly unicorns with cardigans. :D Too much sugar. sorry!
Mental deathbat <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 And the winner would be the Stig. Duuh!