The High School Years of Elizabeth Miller - Comments

Well, first of all, I love the layout. I think it's really nice, and the picture is cute, though I think it should be a little bit more over to the right. But that's just me. One thing with the layout though, was that the words overlap the picture at some point and make it harder to read.

I read through the story and didn't find many mistakes at all, I can't wait to see where it's going though. [:

I liiiiike this a lot. :3 It's relatable and realistic and it's enjoyable to read. I'll be waiting for more. :)

I liked it. It was entertaining.

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Sounds cool so far-- can't wait for more! :)