Fire in Our Hearts and Ice in Our Veins - Comments

That was a sad way to end the story, I liked it a lot. Now onto the sequel :)

that was a way to end it now to hurry up and read chapters you have up for the sequel :D

Okay so I just read all of this right now while I was at work, and I have three things to say: 1, the mental image of the Blackhawks trying to teach a ballet class was the greatest thing ever; 2, that ending worked out awesome and I'm really impressed with how you pulled it off; and 3, I loved this and I'm going to go immediately read/subscribe to the sequel! :D

Aww they adopted her!! how cute. can't wait for the sequel!

AWWWW they adopted her, :D Harley changed Patrick <3 & good thing you are doing a sequel, it's getting so good right now :D Update soon please!!!!! :)

That was a cute date. I hope they will end up together soon. Update soon :D

I don't want them to say goodbye. Patrick's little speech to her was so sweet. She's changing him for the better.

“People always told me this was going to happen. They said someday I’d meet a girl who would make the partying and the drinking and the casual sex seem unattractive. But you know what they don’t tell you? They don’t tell you that things might not be happily ever after or that she might not even feel the same way. All I can do is pray that things are gonna work out eventually,”

Awww, so sweet, poor Patrick.....................

Wow that was a fantasic chapter. I loved it when Harley just opened up to Patrick. & finding out that she is Cathrines mom was a twist. I wonder if Patrick & Harley will have an actual relationship even with a kid in the picture now. Keep it up!!!! Update soon :D

I was not expecting Cathrine to be her daughter but that makes things more interesting now. I love that she still wanted to see her daughter.

Keep up the kick butt work!

Thanks for the Dedication to my story. :) I'm glad you like it.

I like where the story is going. The dance class was so cute :D. Keep it up. Update soon :)

Oh my God seriously had me laaughing and crying! I could seriously see Brent, up in front of a bunch of little girls trying to teach ballet, and Sharpie thinking hes too cool. i also love seeing the sweet side of Pat. You dont see too often

First off, thank you so much for dedicating the chapter to me and getting my story out there. You did not have to do that at all.

I'm really curious to see what that whole thing was about. Harley didn't sound freaked out when Pat found her that makes me think she's kinda use to this.

Sharpy and the guys teaching her dance class was so cute. I could totally see them doing something like that and failing miserably.

You are an awesome writer and I can't wait for the next update of this.

She must have heard Patrick and Jon talking. I hope things are really crazy and her and Pat can talk. I think Patrick is willing to become a somewhat new man for Harley.

Keep up the amazing work. I like the way you are taking the story so far. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading.

I wonder what Patrick finds. I love it how Patrick is changing for Harley :D. I want to know more about this Trevor dude. Keep it up! Please update soon ;)

I love it so far. Can't wait for more :D

I Love this story. Its so Cute :). Harley & Patrick make a cute couple. and the thing that Cathrine said to Sharpy was so funny. Keep it up!!! Please update soon :D